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set  upon the table
a  m u l t i t u d e    of KNIVES--
maybe you are not able
to live a peaceful life...
    and you're sharpening each blade -
is that one for ME?
i'll turn full circle and bare my back
  so you can do it obviously

you claim to be:
a purist, a perfection - you claim to be everything you are not
Dear Sadist

you claim to be:
a god, everything I love - but you are nothing
but a Sadist
©2006-2009 ~VonGrimm
:iconvongrimm:

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old poem

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:iconeris4:
powerful. very powerful.
nice switch of control i must say.
congrats. its great.

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Something sappy and covered in chocolate
:iconvongrimm:
thanks alot :D I had great inspiration at the time I wrote it heh

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the presence is coming.
[link]

(] insanity isn't a decision - it's a necessity. [)

there's a life inside my life - but i can't seem to find it... :shrug:
:iconeris4:
ahhh of course. that always is the key.
i do love your style though. it reminds of cummings.... always a good memory. :)
keep it up!

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Something sappy and covered in chocolate
:iconflying-high2:
this is really good mate, perfect for how i feel right now

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Havoc
:iconvongrimm:
thx alot - glad i could oblige ;)

--
the presence is coming.
[link]

(] insanity isn't a decision - it's a necessity. [)

there's a life inside my life - but i can't seem to find it... :shrug:

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